This is our first draft. On reviewing it and based on our audience feedback we decided to change a few things. One of the main points mentioned was the costume, as it didn't allow the audience to identify between the different characters. The characters were all wearing all black, therefore the audience wouldn't be able to distinguish between the villains and the victims.
The other point given to us was that there was too much headroom within the point of view shot, therefore showing that the attention is not only on the character but also on the things around him. We need to focus on the framing of our shots.
Taking these points into account we decided to re-shoot the whole sequence- paying closer attention to framing and giving the victim a more distinguised costume. We decided on a white jumper to symbolise innocence and vunerability. We wanted to keep the casual look to fit in with our genre.
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